You'll have to forgive her, Dante, for not noticing the changes sooner. Finding yourself in a strange city in the middle of a thunderstorm was rather rattling, even if she didn't show it. She finally turns to look at him. Really look at him.
"If we've got all the time in the world, then go ahead and give me the long version, but first, you've changed. It's only been a couple of weeks since I last saw you, but it looks like you're at least a few years older," she said. "Nice coat."
She knew it couldn't have been that long since she saw him. After all, he still owed her a lot, or did he? She wasn't so sure anymore. At least, not here with this Dante.
I apologize, she's still a bit rusty.
"If we've got all the time in the world, then go ahead and give me the long version, but first, you've changed. It's only been a couple of weeks since I last saw you, but it looks like you're at least a few years older," she said. "Nice coat."
She knew it couldn't have been that long since she saw him. After all, he still owed her a lot, or did he? She wasn't so sure anymore. At least, not here with this Dante.